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Post by Zach Braff [Pgcool] on Oct 4, 2010 17:28:12 GMT -5
It's time to find out who the third person leaving the Ultimate Writer will be! I hope you had fun with this task! Let's get to it...
Profile - 10/10
The first perfect score of the game! I really like your song, and it includes a lot of metaphorical features and literary devices. It has to do with a pastime, and it's always good to write a song based on memories of the past. Nice work and congratulations on the first perfect score!
Damien - 9/10
I thought your song was very funny! It was meant to be a funny song, and I loved that it was about Facebook. It was definitely creative and I thought you did a good job! Nice work!
NICK - 9/10
Your song was a song that I can actually create a melody for, and actually imagine what it would sound like. I thought it was very catchy lyrics and I think you did almost perfect. The only thing is, they lyrics were a little repetitive (i'm guessing if I heard it done with music and everything it would sound normal) and the chorus was a bit weird how you had incomplete sentences... but once again it would probably sound fine with the music. For lyrics alone, 9/10.
Tomas - 8/10
I picture your song being a rap. Whether that's what was intended or not, I'm not sure. Your lyrics were okay, but at times it felt a little choppy. A few spelling errors, but that didn't really effect the outcome (and they were probably just typos).
Alina - 8/10
Your song was very good, and very meaningful. The main thing was spelling mistakes got in the way and sometimes confused me (and made me reread the sentence) but none the less, I thought it was a very good song that I can actually see someone writing, recording, and making it into a hit.
Jigsaw - 7/10
I'm not a huge metal fan, but I have to give you the benefeit of the doubt here. I know metal songs can sometimes be really upsetting and sad, and sometimes no even make perfect sense... Since I know you were making it a metal song I am giving you higher then what I would if you didn't tell me it was a metal song. The lyrics were okay, but if it was to be a pop/rock song it would need some work. But yeah, for a metal song I guess it's pretty good.
Erick - 0/10
Once again you have not completed the task... You promised it wouldn't happen again, but obviously you couldn't hold to that promise. You're eliminated from The Ultimate Writer.
Profile - 10/10
The first perfect score of the game! I really like your song, and it includes a lot of metaphorical features and literary devices. It has to do with a pastime, and it's always good to write a song based on memories of the past. Nice work and congratulations on the first perfect score!
Damien - 9/10
I thought your song was very funny! It was meant to be a funny song, and I loved that it was about Facebook. It was definitely creative and I thought you did a good job! Nice work!
NICK - 9/10
Your song was a song that I can actually create a melody for, and actually imagine what it would sound like. I thought it was very catchy lyrics and I think you did almost perfect. The only thing is, they lyrics were a little repetitive (i'm guessing if I heard it done with music and everything it would sound normal) and the chorus was a bit weird how you had incomplete sentences... but once again it would probably sound fine with the music. For lyrics alone, 9/10.
Tomas - 8/10
I picture your song being a rap. Whether that's what was intended or not, I'm not sure. Your lyrics were okay, but at times it felt a little choppy. A few spelling errors, but that didn't really effect the outcome (and they were probably just typos).
Alina - 8/10
Your song was very good, and very meaningful. The main thing was spelling mistakes got in the way and sometimes confused me (and made me reread the sentence) but none the less, I thought it was a very good song that I can actually see someone writing, recording, and making it into a hit.
Jigsaw - 7/10
I'm not a huge metal fan, but I have to give you the benefeit of the doubt here. I know metal songs can sometimes be really upsetting and sad, and sometimes no even make perfect sense... Since I know you were making it a metal song I am giving you higher then what I would if you didn't tell me it was a metal song. The lyrics were okay, but if it was to be a pop/rock song it would need some work. But yeah, for a metal song I guess it's pretty good.
Erick - 0/10
Once again you have not completed the task... You promised it wouldn't happen again, but obviously you couldn't hold to that promise. You're eliminated from The Ultimate Writer.
