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Post by Zach Braff [Pgcool] on Oct 9, 2010 22:46:21 GMT -5
It's time to eliminate one of you 6!
Damien - 10/10
You had a very creative character and I really did like the idea and how you included the past life of Xavier! I thought it was very well written, and definitely the best work I've seen from you! I was glad to read this, thanks so much and congratulations!
Tomas - 10/10
Once again we have another VERY good backstory, and good detail on current life! I really did enjoy it, and I find the format pretty creative! Honestly, your character profile exceeds my expectations just like Damien's did. You did VERY well! Congratulations!
Profile - 9/10
I like your character! He sounds like an interesting person! The only problem was your format... I didn't find it very creative. But I did like the detail you gave and I can see this person in a tv show.
Jigsaw - 8/10
Your character had the basic story of Damien's character... Parents died from a car crash... got taken care of by a different family memeber. But Damien integrated all the details in a creative way, while yours was in a basic paragraph by paragraph format. Although your character was interesting, I think it needed a bit more organization.
NICK - 7/10
Your profile was a little bit difficult to read... Whether it was on purpose or not, the "ewww"'s got in the way a lot and distracted me. Your character had info on past life, but I just didn't feel like you went enough in depth with details.
Alina - 0/10
It sucks that you didn't complete this challenge. You did so well in past challenges. I'm sorry, but it's only fair to eliminate you from the game.
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You're next task will be posted tomorrow, just so it's easier for the 48 hours, and easier for me to post results hopefully earlier! For now, relax and take pride in knowing you made the final 5!
Damien - 10/10
You had a very creative character and I really did like the idea and how you included the past life of Xavier! I thought it was very well written, and definitely the best work I've seen from you! I was glad to read this, thanks so much and congratulations!
Tomas - 10/10
Once again we have another VERY good backstory, and good detail on current life! I really did enjoy it, and I find the format pretty creative! Honestly, your character profile exceeds my expectations just like Damien's did. You did VERY well! Congratulations!
Profile - 9/10
I like your character! He sounds like an interesting person! The only problem was your format... I didn't find it very creative. But I did like the detail you gave and I can see this person in a tv show.
Jigsaw - 8/10
Your character had the basic story of Damien's character... Parents died from a car crash... got taken care of by a different family memeber. But Damien integrated all the details in a creative way, while yours was in a basic paragraph by paragraph format. Although your character was interesting, I think it needed a bit more organization.
NICK - 7/10
Your profile was a little bit difficult to read... Whether it was on purpose or not, the "ewww"'s got in the way a lot and distracted me. Your character had info on past life, but I just didn't feel like you went enough in depth with details.
Alina - 0/10
It sucks that you didn't complete this challenge. You did so well in past challenges. I'm sorry, but it's only fair to eliminate you from the game.
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You're next task will be posted tomorrow, just so it's easier for the 48 hours, and easier for me to post results hopefully earlier! For now, relax and take pride in knowing you made the final 5!
I really enjoyed this one!