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Post by Zach Braff [Pgcool] on Oct 17, 2010 17:37:56 GMT -5
Sorry I'm late! Let's find out who's eliminated...
Jigsaw - 10/10
A very good poem, and a very interesting one! It used lots of literary devices in it, and the metaphors you used were terrific! Amazing work, and congratulations!
Damien - 9/10
Your poem was quite meaningful, and it had a strong message to it. While reading it though, it just didn't feel like it flowed super smoothly. But it was obviously a freeverse poem and I know sometimes freeverse poems aren't always smooth. Nice job!
Nick - 9/10
Once again, and nice poem. The only thing is the message was a bit unclear (maybe only to me... but still). I thought it was interesting though.
Profile - 8/10
I liked the poem, but there were a few grammar errors that interfered for me. I like the message, but it was choppy in area. It was good, but could have been better.
Tomas - 6/10
A very random poem, and a very weird choice... It definitely did not flow, and it was definitely choppy. The ending really didn't save you by saying f*** this poem... You said it was a risk, and this risk just didn't pay off... Your eliminated. Sorry!
Jigsaw - 10/10
A very good poem, and a very interesting one! It used lots of literary devices in it, and the metaphors you used were terrific! Amazing work, and congratulations!
Damien - 9/10
Your poem was quite meaningful, and it had a strong message to it. While reading it though, it just didn't feel like it flowed super smoothly. But it was obviously a freeverse poem and I know sometimes freeverse poems aren't always smooth. Nice job!
Nick - 9/10
Once again, and nice poem. The only thing is the message was a bit unclear (maybe only to me... but still). I thought it was interesting though.
Profile - 8/10
I liked the poem, but there were a few grammar errors that interfered for me. I like the message, but it was choppy in area. It was good, but could have been better.
Tomas - 6/10
A very random poem, and a very weird choice... It definitely did not flow, and it was definitely choppy. The ending really didn't save you by saying f*** this poem... You said it was a risk, and this risk just didn't pay off... Your eliminated. Sorry!
