Finale [Results]

[Zach Braff [Pgcool]]

Congratulations on making it all the way to the end! You have all done what 6 other people could not! Here's how it will work. I will take time to read and comment on all your work from this task. Then after that, I will figure out who wins, who's 2nd, and who's 3rd! I will then post it, and the game will be over! I hope you guys had fun, and look out for another round of Ultimate Writer to come out eventually!

*PG Starts Reading*

[Zach Braff [Pgcool]]

Profile

Story: Very interesting story. I like that you made it feel like I was the person getting shot with your use of imagery, and description. It was very dramatic and I liked it a lot! Nice job!

Profile (No pun intended ): It was a very interesting story! But I don't really think it was a profile. Profile's more tell the characters apperance, and everything. What you did basically was have another story based on the persons afterlife. I did like how you made this about the same person as the story though! But I feel like this was more of a story, and not a profile.

Poem: Definitely a great poem! It had good meaning to it and I really thought it was great.

Overall: You've been amazing throughout this entire process, and I am so glad you played in this game! Good luck, and we'll find out your fate in a litte bit.

[Zach Braff [Pgcool]]

Nick

Review: I thought this was VERY well written. I have never watched the movie before, but after reading this... you make me really want to go out and find a copy of it. The thing about this is you covered everything without giving to much information away. You gave just enough of the plot away to get me interested. You put detail in what made the move good... All in all, this was an amazing review!

Poem: Amazing poem! I can't begin to tell you how glad I am you chose zombies instead of vampires! This was a very well written poem, and it had a mini story to it also that I really enjoy. Impressive!

Story: Once again, another piece of great work from you! This had my attention from start to finish, and I really enjoyed it. I could see you writing a mini book (and would love to see you do that). It was very detailed, and easily created images in my mind!

Overall: You are a great writer, and I've enjoyed almost all your pieces of work this season! I really think you have great potential and you have proven to do what it takes to impress people (by adding extra images to you writing so people know what they'll read about before reading it). You definitely have a great carreer ahead of you! Good luck in the final results!

[Zach Braff [Pgcool]]

Jigsaw

Poem: An interesting poem. It was short, but you were able to fit meaning into the 9 lines of poetry. I definitely enjoyed that poem! Nice work!

Story: I liked the wise man in your story, and I thought it was an interesting story. Very mysterious, especially at the end. It leaves it basically a cliffhanger which is good, because now I want to know what happened to him. Well written, but a few grammar mistakes (but it didn't interfere so much). Nice job!

Musical: I thought it was very strange sadly... I think if you're planning to do a musical, you need to write out a whole script with everything... I know you were limited to only 500 words, but I think that in this case, you shouldn't have done this. It came off more like a review, and I find it a bit awkward. The storyline was a bit strange also. It's was just okay for me,

Overall: You've had your ups and downs, but you've definitely proved yourself in the final task here! Your poem, and story were excellent, and your musical was a bit strange... You still did very well, and I definitely enjoyed having you compete this season! I look forward to seeing you write in the future!

[Zach Braff [Pgcool]]

Now it's the moment of truth! It is time to crown the winner of Ultimate Writer 1! This is a very tough decision for me, because all 4 of you are great writers! I'm basing this decision mostly on this task, but I am taking into account all past tasks also... Don't get mad if you don't win... there can only be one winner, but in my mind I wish you could all win this thing! Without further ado... Let's get to it! In third place is...


































































































































Profile
Definitely a strong writer, and I really do think you will move onto great things! I just feel there is room to improve (like there is in everyone), but don't let this bring you down! 3rd place is a great accomplishment and I really think this should bring your confidence level up to write more! Congratulations on making it to 3rd place!

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Jigsaw
You are definitely a great writer, there's no doubt in that. Sometimes grammar errors get in the way, but that's just natural and it happens with everyone. I think with practice you can go onto great things and I really, really encourage you to continue writing. Congratulations!

That means the winner is...
NICK
You've impressed me throughout this whole season with the quality of your writing, and I really have enjoyed every writing you've done! You're a crazy good writer, and like I said... I would like to see you write an actual full length story (if you ever do, send it to me!). It's been a pleasure having you in this game, and thanks so much for playing!

So congratulations to you 3, and congratulations to everyone else for a very amazing game! I enjoyed hosting this game, and it was mostly because of you guys! I couldn't have asked for a better group of writers, and you guys definitely delivered in all aspects! Thank you so much for playing, and I look forward to seeing some of you next season on...

The Ultimate Writer 2

[Profilerreid]

Congrats Nick. I think you desrive it. I mean as much as I can from not being about read any of your work... I know I failed on a few of the tasks and that's okay with me. lol This is for fun after all.

Oh and Congrats Jigsaw.

So Pgcool, when you going to open the other baords so I can read this guys work?!

[Zach Braff [Pgcool]]

Oct 24, 2010 15:23:00 GMT -5 Profilerreid said:

So Pgcool, when you going to open the other baords so I can read this guys work?!

Stay calm Results just got post xD I'll start opening the boards soon.

[Nick (Jonas)]

YAY! Thank you so much for hosting, I had a lot of fun. I had a case of writers block so I was nervous to post but thanks so much again! I am so excited!

And Congrats to the runner ups! I look forward to playing another game with you all.

Bye!

[!Chad!]

Oct 24, 2010 16:23:50 GMT -5 Nick (Jonas) said:

YAY! Thank you so much for hosting, I had a lot of fun. I had a case of writers block so I was nervous to post but thanks so much again! I am so excited!

And Congrats to the runner ups! I look forward to playing another game with you all.

Bye!

Congrats Nick! I love your Signature

If you want to judge next season (if you aren't playing) with me and PG then we would be honored.

Also, to anyone in this game who wants to play S3 of Survivor, you would be welcomed with open arms .

[Damien McBride]

Congrats NICK Cant wait for season 2!!

[Jigsaw]

Thanks for hosting this game. It’s was a good time out from the usual Survivor and Big Brother.

Congrats Both Emmy and Nick for making the end with me.
Congrats Nick for winning.

And thanks everyone for participating in this game. To tell the truth, I thought that the game would be full of in-actives, being a new game concept. Glad to see that I was wrong, and I had lots of fun in this game. Can't wait to see what other new games RGRU come up with.

Lastly, congrats myself for coming up with the strangest piece in the whole game.